Pitch evaluation

In my opinion our pitch task was successfully completed and presented. Everyone in the group knew their role and time managed their selves properly to create a professional piece of presentation at the end of our pitch tasks deadline.
There was one person missing from our group which happened last minute but we managed to pull ourselves together and present his ideas for him.
Our pitch did not have waffling within and was clear and straight forward because we came up with a very fair plan.
Some regular positive ideas presented by our peers are as it follows:
- good detail
- clearly explained
-visually interesting

I agree with these comments as we have put in a lot of detailed work which was actually summarised in our pitch presentation however individually it could be identified within our individual pitch posts.

Targets
From the feedback we received, we will be adding more visual representations, updating our shot list and creating a more detailed storyboard which will make our idea more informative and up to date.
Some slides were not added into the presentation which will be added to improve the presentation.
We will also be giving more sound examples that we will be including in our film as we are still in the process of deciding which one will suit the best.